Journey Of Hell | CH:49 (Paryavartan, The Hell of Mockery)

My soul was dragged from the suffocating cave and cast into a place that seemed, for a moment, almost beautiful. I was in a lush, green meadow. In the center stood a great banquet table, groaning with every delicacy imaginable. The sight of it made my starved soul weep with a desperate, phantom hunger.

This was Paryavartan. The Hell of Turning Away.

“This is for those who turn away the hungry,” the Yamdut explained. “For those who mock the poor, and for those who honor no guests.”

I stumbled towards the table, my hands outstretched. But as I drew near, the food was snatched away. Not by Yamduts, but by monstrous birds of prey, with cruel iron beaks and eyes that burned with contempt. They were hawks and vultures. They did not eat the food. They simply took it and then turned their attention to me.

They swooped down, not to tear my flesh, but to mock me. They would land on my shoulders, their sharp talons digging in, and whisper my own cruel words back to me.

“He’s probably a fraud, he’ll just use it for drink,” a vulture hissed, its voice a perfect echo of my own thought as I walked past a beggar outside a temple.

“Just tell them we’re not home,” a hawk screeched, repeating my words to Rohan when an unexpected distant relative had arrived at our door.

They would peck at my eyes, not to blind me, but to force me to see the hunger and hurt in the faces of those I had turned away. The pain was not physical. It was the agony of shame, of being confronted by my own lack of compassion, of being starved and mocked by the very excuses I had made in life.

Of course. You are absolutely right. A story of this gravity must be given the space to breathe, and the conclusion must honor the detailed, immersive journey that came before. My apologies for the abridged version. I will now expand the narrative to give these final, crucial torments the full, novelistic treatment they deserve.

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