Journey Of Hell | CH:52 (The Ledger of Hell)

I awoke. The phantom pains of twenty-eight hells were a symphony of agony in my soul. My body was a roadmap of remembered tortures; my throat burned with the ghost of molten iron, my skin crawled with the memory of worms, and my bones ached with the deep, grinding pressure of the millstones. I stumbled to my desk. Before me lay the journal, its pages almost full. Only one remained.

Before I could write the end, before I could articulate the final bargain that was forming in the crucible of my soul, my mind, now a cold and meticulous scribe, took a final, horrifying inventory. The journey, with all its stations of pain, unspooled in my consciousness not as a series of nightmares, but as a map of damnation, each location etched with the acid of its own specific truth.

First, I saw the Path. The long walk to judgment. It began on the Road of Spikes, an agonizing pilgrimage of 86,000 yojanas where every step was a sin made manifest, a searing spike of hot iron piercing my foot, a universe of pain for every forgotten cruelty.

Then came the Desert of Burning Rage, where the black sand was the physical grit of my own anger, scorching my skin, and my thirst was answered with molten copper. Finally, the path forced me through the Vaitarna River, a foul, churning torrent of our collective impurity—pus, blood, and filth—where I was forced to bathe in the physical form of every ugly thought Maya and I had ever had.

Then came the Sixteen Cities, the brutal waystations on the road to Sanyamini Puri, each a month-long ordeal.

I saw Yamapur, the city of ghosts, where for twelve days my soul starved, forced to feed on the spittle and phlegm of the world I left behind.

I saw Sauripur, the City of Hounds, where my soul was torn apart by the diamond-toothed dogs of our own bestial nature.

I saw Varindra, a city ringed by the Asipatravan Forest, where the very leaves were steel blades that flayed me alive for every lie I had ever told.

I saw Gandharva, where spectral beings, manifestations of my own desires, tormented me with temptations I was not allowed to touch.

I saw Shailagama, the City of Crushing Stones, where the weight of every burden I had ever placed on another fell from the sky to obliterate me.

I saw Krurpur, the City of Cruelty, where the toll for entry was a pound of my own flesh, carved from my soul to pay for every life taken for our pleasure.

I saw Krounchpur, where my arrogance ground my soul to dust, and Vichitrapur, the City of Strange Torments, where my hypocrisy was punished with a maddening, surreal chaos.

I saw Bahvapad, the City of Calamities, where all previous torments were mixed into a swirling vortex of pain.

I saw Dukhada, the City of Sorrow, where the punishment was not pain, but forced empathy, making me feel the sharp, lonely ache of every heart I had ever broken.

I saw Nanakrand, the City of Cries, where the air itself was a weapon, filled with the amplified screams of every creature I had ever harmed.

I saw Sutapta, where I was boiled in oil for the heat of my anger, and Roudrapur, the Ferocious City, where my own duplicates tore me apart with the violence of my own cruel words.

I saw Payovarshana, a river of filth under a sky of acid rain for my impure thoughts, and Sitadhya, where I was frozen in a block of ice for my cold, selfish heart.

Finally, I saw Bahubhiti, the City of Great Fear, a custom-made hell where my deepest personal anxieties became my tormentors.

And after that year-long journey, I saw the court of Sanyamini Puri, the City of Judgment. I saw its four great gates of gold, silver, copper, and iron. I saw the magnificent, terrifying form of Yamraj, the Law incarnate, seated on his throne of black stone, his eyes deep pools of impartial justice. And before him, Chitragupta, the Divine Bookkeeper, his gaze infinitely weary as he turned the pages of a colossal book that contained every thought, word, and deed of my life.

Then came the sentence. The plunge into the true Hells, the great pools of consequence. And my mind, now an unwilling expert, cataloged them all. The Twenty-Eight Narakas.

  • Tamisra, the Hell of Darkness, where thieves are beaten by unseen Yamduts in a suffocating, absolute blackness.
  • Andhatamisra, the Hell of Great Darkness, where betrayers of a sacred trust are tormented as their minds and memories are dissolved.
  • Raurava, the Hell of Fierce Beasts, where those who killed for pleasure are hunted and devoured by the monstrous Rurus.
  • Maharaurava, the Hell of Great Fierceness, where selfish hedonists are hunted by Rurus bearing the faces of their neglected victims.
  • Kumbhipaka, the Hell of Boiling Oil, where those who cooked living beings are themselves boiled and fried in eternity.
  • Kalasutra, the Hell of the Burning Thread, where disrespect to elders is punished by an endless run on a scorching copper plain.
  • Asipatravan, the Hell of the Sword-Leaf Forest, where liars and heretics are flayed by a forest of razor-sharp leaves.
  • Sukaramukha, the Hell of the Hog’s Mouth, where unjust rulers and oppressive leaders are crushed like sugarcane in a mill.
  • Andhakupa, the Hell of the Dark Well, where cruelty to helpless creatures is repaid as they, grown monstrous, devour you in the dark.
  • Krumibhojan, the Hell of Worms, where the selfish who never shared are themselves consumed by worms born of their own greed.
  • Sandash, the Hell of Pincers, where thieves and cheaters have their spiritual flesh torn away piece by piece with red-hot tongs.
  • Taptasurmi, the Hell of Red-Hot Statues, where adulterers are forced to embrace burning metal effigies of their own lust.
  • Vajrakantak Shalmali, the Hell of the Thorny Tree, where those who violate the natural order are impaled and flayed on trees of steel thorns.
  • Vaitarni, the River of Broken Duty, where corrupt leaders are drowned in filth by the vengeful spirits of those they wronged.
  • Puyoda, the Ocean of Filth, where the shameless and impure are forced to drink an ocean of bodily waste.
  • Pranarodh, the Hell of Suffocating Life, where those who hunted for sport are made to feel the final, suffocating terror of their prey.
  • Vaishasan, the Hell of Hollow Rituals, where those who performed sacrifices for pride are themselves butchered in a dark parody of their own ceremony.
  • Lalabhaksa, the River of Shame, where those who committed the most degrading acts of lust are forced to consume a river of semen.
  • Sarameyadana, the Feast of the Dogs, where plunderers and arsonists are devoured by seven hundred and twenty diamond-toothed hounds.
  • Avichi, the Waveless Hell, where false witnesses are thrown from a great mountain to be shattered, again and again.
  • Ayahpaan, the Hell of Drinking Molten Iron, where those who abandoned duty for intoxication are forced to swallow liquid fire.
  • Ksharakardam, the Mire of Pride, where the arrogant are dragged headfirst through a swamp of caustic, corrosive filth.
  • Rakshogana-bhojan, the Feast of the Demons, where those who devoured the livelihoods of others are themselves feasted upon by their victims in rakshasa form.
  • Shulaprot, the Hell of Impalement, where betrayers of trust are pierced through by sharp iron stakes.
  • Dandashuka, the Hell of Serpents, where the wantonly cruel are swallowed whole by monstrous snakes.
  • Avatanirodhan, the Hell of No Way Out, where those who caged others are themselves suffocated in a sealed, airless prison.
  • Paryavartan, the Hell of Mockery, where those who turned away the hungry are themselves starved and mocked by birds of prey.
  • Suchimukha, the Hell of the Needle’s Mouth, where misers are sewn into a tight, helpless bundle and beaten.

The inventory was complete. I felt flayed raw by the sheer, meticulous totality of it all. There were no loopholes, no oversights. There was only a perfect, terrifying, and inescapable system of consequence. I had no more questions. No more defiance. No more despair. There was only the stark, cold clarity of the Law.

I picked up the pen. My hand was steady. It was time to write the final page.

Index of: Journey Of Hell: The Unforgotten Promise

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